22 April 2015

Creating Narrative

The revengeful man and a pony called peter

The night started on a Saturday night at around 11pm, It was the end of September and a group of middle-aged women were about to hit the town. Little did they know they would be way out of their depth. It was the weekend of Freshers and the group of seven or eight ladies decided to make the most of their night out.

As one by one they venture home there was on woman, married in her early thirties who ended up taking home a young student. Little did she know that her partner was on the way home from a busy weekend working abroad. He came home early to surprise her but instead found another man lay with his wife in bed. He ordered both of them out of the house, outraged at what she had done to him, beneath all the anger and rage he was trying his best to stay composed to think of a way to get her back, he vowed to himself that he would get his revenge.

Although petty, he started by sending her abusive messages and phone calls that just never seemed to get anywhere and after endless abuse and different forms of retaliation he began to doubt that he would ever get his own back. The final thing that he resorted to was something that he was almost certain would work, he had chosen to put an X-Rated video of them both up on Facebook, assuming that family friends and anybody else would see the video. The video quickly went viral, getting views upon views. His soon to be ex wife rapidly began to loose friends family and all the things that she had it had ruined her social life and everything she had, losing her job her house.


After weeks of trying to piece together what she had left she began to develop depression her life had been ruined, she gathered up as much money as she could from different places. She had nobody, so decided to adopt a miniature pony called peter, peter helped her recover from what had gone on over weeks and months of relaxation she began to get back on track with her life and new that the first thing she wanted to do was get justice for what had gone on. She began campaigning to get Crime Videos sentenced instead of being laughed off by individuals as there own mistakes.

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